strengths and weaknesses

i didn't really read the comments, it was more of a skim but what i got most out of it is i tend to repeat myself and argue things twice.i think to help fix my problem i could have more people evaluate my essay and read through it myself more to find places where i repeat myself so i can correct it, or at least reword it. i would say my strongest point as a writer is that i can make a structured essay. i know what an essay should look like and i try to represent that as much as possible. my weakness would either be that i repeat myself, or that i have a hard time picking my choice of words, which usually ends up in writer's block.