CHAPTERS 6 AND 7

well chapter six was interesting to say the least. i learned alot about gatsby and who he really was. the fact that he was a janitor is pretty demeaning. and he basically watched cody drink himself to death which seriously made me almost cry because my grandpa almost drank himself to death too. so i think it was great that he decided that he wouldnt drink. and that mistress practically stole that money from gatsby, i mean when you think about it, and it was completly unfair to gatsby. but on the bright side he becam rich and successful anyways so i guess everything worked itself out. inviting tom over was dangerous because he is starting to become suspisious of gatsby and daisy cause she always goes to his house and he just said he knew her. and the party wasnt exactly a good idea either cause daisy didnt haave a good time because tom said gatsbys money came from bootlegging, so gatsby feels terrible because he wants thing to be like they used to be. i think chapter six says alot for the sensitivity to status that spurs gatsby on. his obbession with his wealth is obviously his way of venting out the negativity of being a poor janitor. gatsbys greatest achievment is his idenity, and i think gatsbys personal view of daisy is clouded by his past and doesnt realize that she's changed.


chapter 7 was so crazy! i cant believe that gatsby cancelled all of his parties, which were basically his role so far in the book, and fired everybody and hired a bunch of wolfshiems friends. when nick goes to toms he finds jordan and gatsby there too, which i thought was kinda wierd, and then suddenly theres a baby? speciffically a baby that had never been mentioned before! even weirder, they all suddenly decide to drive to new york? tom again proves how much of an ignorant jerk he is by making fun of gatsby, saying he never went to oxford, then accuses gatsby of bootlegging. i feel like im just summerizing so chapterr seven suprised me because i never thought that tom and gatsby would agrue over daisy and i also thought it was creepy that nick snuck into those peoples' house

chapters 3, 4, and 5

i thought the third chapter was really good. nick had met Gatsby at a party which i thought was going to happen later on in the novel. nick went with that Jordan girl to the party but she ditched her date to be with him which i thought was really rude.i thought it was funny that nick didn't know who Gatsby was until he was talking to him, about him. i think this chapter really sets a good basis for the story and I'm expecting it to get even more interesting. while the author does a good job in detail and opinion, i don't like how he broke off from the story when he was talking to the guy who crashed his car. i think sticking to the story would have been more interesting and would have contributed to the story more than how he did it. i am also anticipating that Gatsby will become a very round, well developed character in the story. i think his presence contributes to how nick feels and describes his experiences so i hope he becomes more of a protagonist than an antagonist. over all i think the story is developing well even though its still the first few chapters and i think its going to develop into an interesting story.

i didnt think much of the fourth chapter because nothing had really gotten my attention. gatsby, as a character, isnt really round. i thought his role in this book wouldve been larger than a cocky party host. but i think chapter four gives him depth. he becomes mysterious because of the white card and the man he introduced nick to and we learn of his love for daisy and that jordan is to set up a reunion. i thought the story between daisy and gatsby was really sad because she loved him but she married tom after gatsby left for war and he wrote that letter to her. i think that jordan is also growing into a more rounded character because she is bacoming involved with everything surrounding nicks life.

chapter five was definatly satisfying. jordan and nick just had a date and now nick is asking for help with daisy. at first i was suprised to see gatsby ask him that because they had only known each other for a short time, but im glad that nick accepted his request. the beginning of the reunion seemed really akward at first but over time it turned out to be a great idea. it had become so much fun that daisy and gatsby had forgotten that nick was even there so nick quietly snuck out and let daisy and gatsby be alone.

strengths and weaknesses

i didn't really read the comments, it was more of a skim but what i got most out of it is i tend to repeat myself and argue things twice.i think to help fix my problem i could have more people evaluate my essay and read through it myself more to find places where i repeat myself so i can correct it, or at least reword it. i would say my strongest point as a writer is that i can make a structured essay. i know what an essay should look like and i try to represent that as much as possible. my weakness would either be that i repeat myself, or that i have a hard time picking my choice of words, which usually ends up in writer's block.

the awakening

i read the awakening during the first week of break so i don't remember what but i thought that it was a great argument towards women's rights in the community and in the household. it seemed very bleak and short, though, specifically in terms of detail and literal length. i like the book's argument for women's right in the community and the household because people say that it is wrong to persecute people because of their appearance, religion, etc. but men have oppressed women all the time. whether that is terms of voting, or even having a job, women have have been pressured by society to stay at home to cook, clean, and mind the children, which just isn't fair. i honestly really liked this book but i do not like how the author chose to just imply that Edna died when she was out into the sea.although i understand the authors symbolism in the water Be a rebirth of sorts, but, i think that this was simply to short of a book to take that sort of jump or assumption that she died.